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-Dear Father Time
Don't mind to rewind
To a purer part
Of an end with no start
To a time without rhyme
Being guilty without crime
To a time without rhyme
To a time without chime
With no repetition
To a time without time
With no sublimination
And elimination without justification
To when peace came in rations
When land was the ocean's corruption
And when floods were solutions
When our dreams meant absolution
-Yours truly, The World
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XNakoeX Featured By Owner May 6, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Amazing. You are a great poet, ma'dam/ sir. :clap:
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JasonFaria Featured By Owner May 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It's sir, and thank you very much.
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dweckie Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012  Student Writer
I love this poem, the last four lines especially. Great job :)
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JasonFaria Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thankyou very much! You've made my day :)
And yes, the very last lines were meant to be the words to seal the deal and i'm glad you made note of that.
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dweckie Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2012  Student Writer
It beautiful, so I'm glad to hear it :D
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